Reviews for Forbidden Love
under estimated artistsoul chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
So well written and so deeply filled with a of these great comparisions. This piece of work flowed very well for how you had it rhyme. I love the last line "Unwelcome feelings remain so well hidden" Wow, powerful and yet also leave a sense of questions. Nice Work.
Galadh Niniel chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
I love this as well, again I can relate. You express the impossibility of that love really well in those "un-"-adjectives you create. "Unkissable lips" *sigh* I suppose it's about same-sex attraction again, isn't it?
AroseFORtheDEAD chapter 1 . 6/12/2004
wow i like that alot alot alot its verty tuching stuff you can realate to
Sworn Destiny chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
Wow. WOW. That is a really great poem. I love how the first line of each stanza is similar.
Hippos CAN Fly chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
AWESOME POEM! Man what's up with all these people that write so much more better than me! GR... Once again, awesome...