|Reviews for Welcome To The Squad|
| AmyJo chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Great concept for a story, though it is a bit vague on the details. Very nice.
| the-shenanigan-machine chapter 1 . 2/24/2004
not bad, but the story reads very repetitively. try not to start every sentence with a variation on "and then", "just then", "then suddenly", "but", "and so" etc etc, it kinda ruins the rest of the writing.