Reviews for Bleeding Carpet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah. Tres bien fait. Continuez d'ecrire, comme toujours. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even better than the first one I read -grin- Lots of angsty emotions here. And also good that you didn't rhyme it because it would have been too forced so I think the non-rhyming sounds better. Jenna xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was amazing! WOW! I'm very impressed... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish my poetry was as good as yours. Excellent imagery indeed, and the end was great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, i realy like the imagery |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic poem, I loved the whole carpet metaphor. Absolutely amazing and beautifully written. I really liked the last few lines, they ended the poem well. Keep up the great work! |