Reviews for Bleeding Carpet
Lauren Raven chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
Yeah. Tres bien fait. Continuez d'ecrire, comme toujours.
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 3/10/2004
Even better than the first one I read -grin- Lots of angsty emotions here. And also good that you didn't rhyme it because it would have been too forced so I think the non-rhyming sounds better.
Jenna xx
KaseyLovesNoOne chapter 1 . 3/4/2004
That was amazing! WOW! I'm very impressed...
The Unbreakable chapter 1 . 2/26/2004
I wish my poetry was as good as yours. Excellent imagery indeed, and the end was great.
FigureItOut chapter 1 . 2/24/2004
wow, i realy like the imagery
imxnotxyourxstar chapter 1 . 2/24/2004
Fantastic poem, I loved the whole carpet metaphor. Absolutely amazing and beautifully written. I really liked the last few lines, they ended the poem well. Keep up the great work!