Reviews for The American Empire
Daemonicean chapter 4 . 8/4/2009
What is the date of this story, and has the UK been taken, or is it just France that's being attacked.
Dash Trudeau chapter 11 . 4/3/2007
I wouldn't have let him leave. I'd be all 'Give me your keys', went to his house, if the keys ddin't work, I'd have came back, shot him, and kept on walking where I go.
Dash Trudeau chapter 9 . 4/3/2007
That is one hell of a stunt.
Dash Trudeau chapter 4 . 4/3/2007
Woah, kinda brutal, don't you think? Only one other platoon followed them? Shouldn't they have said "We've broken through at co-ordinates #", and have reinforcements come in?"

Sorry, your story...
ZaphodChick chapter 3 . 1/16/2005
interesting, i'll finish it when i have time. The whole introducing the characters bothers me just a bit, but to every writer his creative freedom to do what he wants. Good story
C Shot chapter 11 . 8/2/2004
No more chapters? I'm sadden... oh well. update soon.

C Shot chapter 7 . 8/2/2004
"A crack resounded throughout the woods as a sapling was hit and splintered. One of the shards of wood pierced Private Connors in the chest, finishing what the landmine had started a day earlier on the beach."

By far my favorite paragraph so far. Because it makes people remember that everyything is a potential kill object. Fun, fun.

As for me? I'd be honored to be a character in your story, that is if it isn't finished or you dont plan on writing more onto it. After all, you havent updated it in almost two months.

C Shot chapter 6 . 8/2/2004
Le français obtenant leur battement d'âne ? Perfectionner, mais pourquoi la Section Américaine s'il recule ?

C Shot chapter 4 . 8/1/2004
Well I am adding this story to my favorites and gonna finish up chapter 3 of Bleeding America.. I have a very strange concept for it.

But this isnt an email so I will get to the reviewing.

At times this seems a little to rushed.. however, I know that you probably already have countered that problem since the more people right the better they get.

C Shot chapter 3 . 8/1/2004
I love it, love it.. nothing like America kicking Europe's ass to make my day.

Red Marine chapter 4 . 7/30/2004
Sorry I did'nt review earlier, but when I started I didn't get a chance. I find this a very intresting story idea, america as an empire, that's something. You tell a good story with a great cast, I can't wait to read more. No complaints here, keep writing!
- The red one
Mbwun chapter 11 . 6/9/2004
Interesting turn of events indeed. Nice moral ambiguity you added into the mix, with the baby and all.

~He Who Walks On All Fours

PS - Ever see "Reno 911" on Comedy Central?
Moonlite Star chapter 11 . 6/7/2004
Great story you've got going. I like the unique personalities each of your characters hold. Keep writing and update soon. :)
Mbwun chapter 10 . 6/5/2004
James Oswaldo Garcia.

Pretty good chapter, even if it is short. Nice that you decided to continue it; it's a good story.

~He Who Walks On All Fours
ADEEEE chapter 9 . 5/27/2004
When are you going to update this? Anyway, nice chapter.
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