|Reviews for Inside, Outside|
| Eirien chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
Wonderful poem, I like this a lot. My favourite stanza is
"You know the way I function,
The way that I react,
But you don't know the real me,
My fragile soul is cracked."
I can really find myself in that. Again, this would be great as a song, I can picture it perfectly being sung with the lovely rhythm and rhyme.
I can relate to every one of your poems so far - which is why I put you on my fave authors and story lists. :-)