Reviews for By himselves
phoenix-rising626 chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
wth? this is so stupi girl or what?
Nathan Murray chapter 2 . 12/22/2004
Well, it's certainly a very interesting staging idea. Cut out the joke at the beginning, man. It's completely off-tone and it feels like a pizza commercial. The minor characters need a lot more development, because they're distractingly one-dimensional at this point. If they're meant to be that way, at least make their interjections amusing. If not, then they need a lot more texture. I'm sure with some effort into it, it'll turn out well.
Rouge Angel chapter 2 . 6/13/2004
Very interresting. hits kinda close to home for me, anyway I want to see more. thats an order.
Luminous Blane chapter 1 . 3/4/2004
not bad, my friend. not bad at all. who's this ". . .him."?