Reviews for Jimmie the Balloon
Nathan Ridge chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
interesting. poor jimmie, he never gets to play with you again...*cries*...at least you can be sure jimmie won't go hungry.
Obake-chan13 chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
Well, it's unique, I'll give you that. I've never read a poem about a balloon before. _
fearphobic chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
aww poor jimmie balloon...kinda makes me wonder how some of my frnds might feel if i forget them for a while...

great poem! loved it...
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/26/2004
aw very random, but sad... one line didnt make sense
Waiting for me to come home, he waits every day for me to come home.
unless you meant for the repition
Eternal Solace chapter 1 . 2/26/2004
This poem was sad in a funny sort of way. Kind of hard to explain it. But I do feel sorry for that poor balloon :(