Reviews for Harm
prayers for rain chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
Beautiful haikus. I like the last stanza where the pain is on the outside and not on the inside anymore but with the pain all the speaker's emotions flowed out as well. Well done.
Eirien chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
This is wonderful. It makes me sad to read it, beautifully as you have voiced it, especially the third haiku stanza, I can picture the situation so vividly. The last haiku stanza is awesome. It is so true. I know what you're talking about. Perfectly expressed. ;-;
Franken chapter 1 . 2/26/2004
That's quite twisted, but I suppose it does get the message across.
imxnotxyourxstar chapter 1 . 2/26/2004
This is absolutely beautiful. I loved it. I really liked the last haiku/stanza thing...Great job!