Reviews for Hopeless
NJ Is My Home chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
i can't really explain why or how i like it but i just do..its a great piece and i like the pattern u wrote it me it seems like the captain is feeling desperate so i'd suggest the title to be: Desperation or something like that, but thats just me..hopeless is a good title tho
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
i like the title though. im sure of it, hehe! very nice poem.
Dakota Alexus chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
I really liked it. It was sharp and no frills, so you get a meaning immediately. Title suggestion is There is.
Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 2/26/2004
I like it. Good rhythm. Also, I think you should leave the title as it is.