Reviews for Made To Dance Together |
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![]() ![]() ![]() How is this removed when its still up on the internet? |
![]() ![]() ![]() why was it removed... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a pretty good story! It's imaginative, definitely. I really liked it, though you might want to put a few commas somewhere. P.S. There are TWO Chinese characters for freedom: 自由. I would know, I'm Chinese, so you might want to change it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this tory, i started reading it about 10.30pm last night and stayed up untill 4am and then continued it in the morning till 4pm in the arvo, it was that good! This story is one of a kind, and i love how they ended up together in the end unlike most stories i have read on fictionpress story. You should be proud of this story, it is absolutely one of my fave fictionpress stories. It's so long it's like a book, and i love that about it... :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! It was the first fictionpress work I read, and inspired me to create an account. Hopefully, you will continue writing and perhaps someday even publish a novel! ~Shadowstreak |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow i like! is there gonna be a sequel? im sure u realize there were a few typos here and there but otherwise id say really well written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() came across your story...just thought id read it! smilez! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was ...AMAZING! This has got to be the best dance story I have read on FP. It's hard enough finding a Dance story, but finding one as awesome as this is even harder to find. I stayed up hours to read this in one day. If you ever plan to write another story, I hope its a dance one. -Liz :D |
![]() ![]() Keep it! It's good. Just have someone give it a good proofreading (if it's too depressing to try to do it yourself). :) :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know that this was written a while ago, but I just wanted to say that this story is awesome! I love the happy ending, Great Job! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOLY GOD! that was freaking awsome! i LOVED IT - even though i probably should be doing my homework i had to finish reading this XD Michael and Jess are THE cutest! much lovexx |
![]() ![]() This is a really good start to your story. I really love it. |
![]() ![]() Now THAT was a STEAMY chapter.!. FINALLY.!. LOL ii loved iit.!. FAN-FRICKEN-TASTIC.!. |
![]() ![]() ![]() tracy is a loser :P and i like :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. Found this at SKoW |