uh-oh! I wonder what's going to happen next. Surely Stasia never really wrote that letter, did she? Or did Stasia write it but for an ex-boyfriend and not Michael? This is an awesome story you have going here! Took me a while to actually finish reading, but it was all worth it. Congratulations on such a great job! I hope you continue soon, but no hurries. I really love Jessica's character...she's pretty cool. So is Michael. Actually, I love all your characters. They seem so real and 3-D. Awesome job!

Ah...Jessica and Elias would be so perfect together...DARN THAT TRACY She can go with Drew ) And now...on to read the rest. ) If you have time, check out "The Search" and R&R! )

Hey, Krissy. Its Svetlana. This is my sn here at fp. I hope the fans read your reviews cause here is what I have to say to them:
The more reviews you leave, the better chance Pretend Jane will have of being inspired... so do her a favor, and give her some nice intelligent reviews... its only fair to give her a little bit of your time when she is writing this story as fast as she can rather than her own pace, because many of you guys want an update. So please review!

uh oh! Nice twist, well written and update soon please

I feel so bad for Jess! So Stay has had a thing for Micheal huh? Wow april is a bitch, I hope this doesn't hurt Micheal and Jess's relationship too much. I so felt Jessicas pain when she saw that pic of Micheal and Donna, in some ways I wish that Jess would get fed up and dump Micheal so he can see what he was losing. And it is so obvious that Jess is in love with him,
More please!

hey, sorry for reviewing so late. omg! april is such a cow!
what will happen? dun dun dun! lol udate soon

Hm...I suppose it's possible that Stasia wrote that letter. There was that bit abotu only April knowing...so it's possible. But it's also been some time, and I have a feeling that the way Stasia may have felt about him, (if true) is not true anymore. I suppose it could be, but I get the vibes that she likes Kyle (she better like him). Heh heh. Even if Stasia had written the letter, who cares? It explains in the letter that she knows he has a girlfriend. So all it says is that Stasia liked a guy who had a girlfriend. Okay...unheard of? NO! And there's no evidence that Michael ever returned the affections. Especially with the testimonies of all the staff and stuff for Stasia. That could be easily squelched. What confuses me is why Michael had an inclination as to what April was planing. Is there more? Hmm...I don't know if there is or not. Oh yeah, I remember one thing I was going to say. Even if Stasia had liked Michael, that wouldn't make Jessica doubt him. Ya know? But she does doubt their relationship now because of the pictures with Donna. It's so obvious that he loves her. THe whole picture by his bed is kind of creepy too. I mean, when you have another girlfriend, it's supposed to be her picture. So I would totally understand if Jessica started backing off on their relationship. I would amost question her if she Didn't. Plus, I think it'd make for some really good emotional scenes in the future, which (come on) can be really fun to write as long as their not in EVERY chapter. Every once in awhile though, you need to try to jerk some tears. It's like almost a requirement of romance stories. Make us feel! Lol. Maybe Michael will realize he cares more about Jessica and needs her influence in his life more than he had originaly thought. That's my hope. Those pics with Donna even have ME questioning their relationship!

Good chapter! April is so evil though! I can't wait to see how Michael deals with the magazine and I think it was Laine that forged the note...Update soon!

hey. he's got some explaining to do. is laina some kind of person that can copy other people's handscript? i think that's what u call someone's writing style. can't think of the right name. anyways, i think it was being too nosy for jessica to even ask about the whole april thing. i mean, yes she has a right to know since she cares for michael but she could've waited till after the date or even the day after. maybe if she'd just left it alone for a night michael would've been ready to tell her. anyways, please update sooN!

WOW! This was one heck of a chapter! I was interested before but now I'm completely hooked on this story! Great job!

omg that was SO bad!

Wow... Yeah that about sums it up...
And I'm so confused now... Not with your writing, because that's awesome. Just with like, did Stasia really write that letter? Or did she write it to someone else and April changed the name? Okay well that wouldn't really work... Did that Lainie girl write it? Maybe she's like an expert on writing styles and made up the letter in Stasia's handwriting?
Ooh or maybe Stasia wrote a love letter to ANOTHER Michael.
Okay... just brainstorming here... My theories are all pretty far fetched though...
Oh no... Jessica's doubting Michael. That's not good. Not good at all.
I'm revitalized by the way, now that i know what april was going to do (and did)...
Oh gosh... what's going to happen next?
Update soon!

O_O uh oh... this is NOT good... um wow... yeah, bad... *ahem* anyway, I can't believe April would do something like that (well actually I can, but it is so WRONG!) God, April should learn to shut her trap and grow up. I really hope you get the next chapter out soon so we can see what happens next. This was written very well, and it had me enthralled (as always)! Until next time,
~Padfoot101

Same here, lol. My friends were talking about strippers the other day- odd conversation- and I mean I personally think it would be scary to see a guy in a thong... *shivers* and tight pants is an I dunno for me, but tight shirts is definately A-okay, lol. And about Jessica and Michael's relationship seeming perfect, I take that back! It's just that in the beginning it all seemed so perfect and well they were like soul mates and all that good stuff... okay I'm confusing myself, but anyways in this chapter it seemed quite realistic, and I barely found a trace of sappiness in the chapter- barely, and I thought the Michael getting jealous part was just all too adorable! I had this smile plastered to my face the whole time I was reading it, and well Michael and Jessica make the perfect couple, not because they're perfect dancers- beautiful inside and out, it's because they have a story to them that makes them who they are, they've got flaws, they may seem perfect, but they're not. In some sense they're damaged and marred, but that's the beautiful part... And they fit together perfectly, kinda lyk two puzzle pieces. Each puzzle piece is unique and its got edges that are jagged and curved- not perfectly straight, but each piece holds a beautiful image in it, and when put together they fit perfectly even though they're in some sense flawed and not perfectly square or rectangular- I hope you get my point, lol. But anyhow awesome chapter! I still can't believe that April could do such a thing, but I kind of understand her in some wierd, awkward way, and I don't blame her completely. She may seem evil, lol, but hey she's living in her sister's shadow, and now wants to emerge from the shadows and darkness and into the light- anyways like I said before awesome chapter, you never seize to amaze me with such talented work, and I guess getting your characters' feelings expressed onto paper/computer screen does come naturally to ya, lol. Update soon!
bLaCkRoSe }-,-

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