AH! Two chapters in one day. I'm very impressed. I can't even crack out one in two months. Hahaha. That's because I'm lazy and a VERY slow writer. Analytical me. Anyways, great job with this chapter. It was really cool, the scene where Michael and Jessica just talked. I love the scenes with them together (not because I'm a fluffy romantic, well... I AM but that's not the main reason) I just like those scenes because they seem so close. Like interconnected. ALmost as if they were one. I know that sounds REALLY corny, but I hope you get what I mean. I'm so frustrated with Miranda, because I totally sympathize with her and all, but I'm also one of those people who likes to make the best out of a situation. She obviously, does not. Grr...it's hard to feel bad for a person when they makes things so much worse for themselves. I'm totally dreading the April situation. obviously what she's gonna do has to do with Statsia. You made that obvious in the end of this chappie. Lol. Oh, btw I lOVE mario. If he were real, and I were older, and we happened to meet, I'd totally date him. Unfortunately all above possibilities are TOTALLY outruled. Actually, I would date every single dancer guy in this story, except for that player one. What's his name...can't remember. I don't like cocky guys. Lol. So this is just great! I'm so excited now for you to update again, but I can feel the story picking up again. Not that is was boring, or dragging on before, but you know stories just have points of higher excitement than others, and one of those moments is coming sooN! I can FEEL it! WOO-hoo! Okay, maybe I just need sleep. That's it...

Awesome chapter... very funny.
Okay... You're killing me here... What's April planning?
At least you're updating lots... I can feel the story getting closer and closer to what April's doing... Closer...
*cough* sorry.
You're right about Miranda and Jessica never actually being friends. That really wouldn't happen in real life. Maybe eventually (think years... or possibly decades) Miranda would find some new guy, and then be sort of semi-friends with Jessica... but not actual friends. Do you have any idea what i'm talking about? I only sort of half understand it myself. It's late. I'm tired... Everything's out of focus...
So anyway, I really liked that chapter. And the funny stories... Hehe, nice touch.
On a diff. note... what's up with Stasia? That's like a whole new puzzley thingy... Something happened... And April knows about it. That could be very bad. Very bad indeed.
But I guess we'll have to wait and see...
Update soon!

Woo! Great chapter! I never liked Miranda before and I STILL don't like her but I can tell that she's changing. This story is so good! At first when I went to read it I was only gonna read it cuz I love dancing but now, after all this love triangle stuff, I can tell that the dancing isn't the only thing keeping me hooked. This story is so GOOD! No, it's not good, it's GREAT! Lol. Go Jess! Go Jess! Go Michael! Go Michael! Uh...Go Mario! Go Mario! He he.
Ha. I love what you said. "Planes are cool as long as they don't crash." I agree. Crashing isn't very good. Lol. I can't wait to fly a plane again! I mean I flew in this little old one but it's not the same. And it sounds so fun from the way you describe it.
WHY would I want to visit Chicago? HELLO? SAVE THE LAST DANCE! Lol. That's kind of the reason. I don't even understand how that...whatever. But I just wanna go to Chicago and New York. I live on the West Coast dangett! And almost EVERYTHING happens on the East Coast! Ha. That's really all you can do in MN? Wow. MN is so famous...for what, I have no idea. But people are talking about it a lot. Hmph. Whatever.
"They call me big LL!" Ha. I love that part too! "Hey Ladies! Yeah? You need to get yo hair done!...I said, yo fellas!" Lol. I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE that song. What's the album called? Cuz I wanna buy it! Just for that one song! I know, I'm crazy. I even downloaded it (illegally might I add...*grins sheepishly*. Hey! I can't figure out how to work the ITunes thing! There's something wrong with the register button or something.) and I listen to it like forty gazillion times a day. And I also downloaded that song "Drop" by Timbaland. Have you heard it? It's in You Got Served. I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE that song too. Lol. It's just the beat. It gets me so pumped up! Muahahaha. Well anyways. I gotta go. I think I'm supposed to go to the mall or something to exchange a jacket but whatever. The day's almost over and we (my family and I) still haven't left! Oh well. OK. Great story and update ASAP!

i tried to make an outline of a story i was doing once and all the events that would take place and everything. but i kept on getting so many of these new ideas that i could barely tell which event came before or after which event. so im kinda wary of them. but it's not like that with all people. anyways, wow. this chapter really shows not to judge a book by its cover. damn can telling the truth change everything. it's like a complete different outlook on people after u hear about their problems and dont judge them on their outward personality. but not everyone's perfect either. great story! please update sooN!

Oh sad chapter! It was just all around depressing, lol, but I really liked it. A lot. I'm glad that Miranda has stopped living behind this false reality. it's great when people finally see the light, and a relief to the readers too! I just hate it when people make excuses for their rude behavior. I can understand Miranda being upset about Jessica knowing about donna first too though! Man, I would want to rip her hair out for that. I really empathize with Miranda, it's hard seeing another girl take the guy you've been in love with for forever. Really hard. And it does look like Jessica just swooped in, ya know? but we really can't help who we like, that is for sure the truth. I'm wondering what April is gonna do, but I'd rather never know and have the whole situation just go away. I don't like that girl one bit. Agh!

This chapter was okay. The beginning paragraph was a bit awkward to read due to all the "April"'s. How 'bout some pronouns, eh?
Other than that, it was good. Now, I only hope that Miranda will open up to healing... but it's completely her choice to do so, of course. Funny how that works, ain't it?
I await the next chapter with eagerness. Update soon! )
~icthus

So, are miranda and Jessica still friends.

man this was usch a sad chapter its hard to belive but now its all out in the open then only other thing to revile is what april is going to do.

next chapter! lol

I loved the chapter. I can't wait for more to come.

omg...im jus readin the beginnin of this chap. and im thinkin mayb mario nd miranda cud end up 2gether...lols

Hehe... Harrychin. However they spell it, it's still crazy.
As for Miranda being unhappy with Jessica and Michael together, well, she'll just have to deal with it. And at least she understands a little better from Jessica's point of view. And feels somewhat ashamed about how she treated Jessica.
Hey! Maybe they'll even be friends! In a few years... ;)
So... April. You're keeping me wondering about her? Darn.
Well, update soon!

watch me give you 20 more reviews... i love reading and rereading this story...

OMG, Guess what? my box seems to be working! YAY!

Woo! *claps like a lunatic* Great chapter. O. I can't wait for the next one. All this April stuff has got me hiped up. *evil grin* So anyways. So planes ARE cool. Cool. Lol. Cause there's always those people that HATE flying and would rather WALK instead and since I don't remember flying on a plane (cuz I was a baby) then I wouldn't know if I was one of those types of people. I sure hope not! But maybe one day I'll get to fly somewhere. Maybe even Chicago! That would be really cool. My friend and I want to visit New York and Chicago one day because we're kinda sick of being stuck in Cali. Can you blame us? :) Well anyways. I'm so glad this chapter had dancing! Woo! *claps again* I love dancing and when there's a lot of dancing in the chapters it makes me want to turn on some music and go crazy! Which, speaking of music. The song you chose for their routine or whatever was Headsprung by LL Cool J. AH! I LOVE THAT SONG! IT IS SO GOOD! I can't even explain how much I love that song. So whenever it comes I turn it up to a deafening level and rock out! Woo! I swear, if it comes on a radio station I REFUSE to get out of the car until it's over. I'm gonna buy that CD dangett! But, of course I have no money so I'll have to wait for Christmas or something. He he. Well great chapter. I'm rambling, I know so I better go. Jeez, this is the longest review I've ever written. Do you feel special? Well, YOU SHOULD! Lol. OK. I g2g. PEACE OUT! Lol.