Reviews for Made To Dance Together |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I totally love this story. It's the typical romance story that gets me all giggly. It's kind of refreshing from all the heavy stuff I used to read. Thanks for the entertainment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One hit KO! Well it's nearing 3 AM and my mother insists I be up early tomorrow... I'm out. Ciao. |
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![]() ![]() They kiss! wow, finally haha. Nice details and all, and continuing it until the next chapter classic. It makes me smile to see a new chapter has been written...keep going! ~JLC |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my good lord...they kissed? YAY! *pulls out balloons and party hats* God, Miranda STILL won't see reason! I mean, can't she see that Michael doesn't like her? LOL! Jessica thinks she has the bad luck to fall for a guy who wants nothing to do with relationships. Ah...but apparently Michael does like her. I think that I have more bad luck than her. I was sitting outside when this guy that my best friend likes, Brandon, drove home. He arrived home, and went inside the house. I was so happy because if he went outside, my best friend would spend every second practically flinging herself at him. So, I let out a sigh of relief. ALL OF A SUDDEN, THE GARAGE DOOR OPENS! And the guy Brandon was outside. I swear, Lady Luck hates me. I love how you got Alyssa's insight on the whole matter, and I also love how you were able to get some of Michael's thoughts too. It was very very insightful for us readers. _ Much thanks. Wow, there's a lot to this story. Your story really does have a lot of depth. Did you have everything planned out and written somewhere? Really, this is really in depth. Or at least way more in depth than anything I can write. My writing sounds so shallow when compared to this. As my stupid art teacher would say, 'This is like a ball of yarn: there are many individual threads.' Maybe dumb art teachers do have some brains...okay, maybe not. I love how you described the choreography so intricately. It seems that you have experience in the dance department section. I didn't know that they actually didn't touch during those er more intimate dance moves. Wow, Jessica was definitely flirting with Michael in this chapter wasn't she. It seems sort of out of character...but then again...Jessica did feel bold that day. Once again, I like that insight...anyway, also like that detail about the kiss. OMG! OMG! ohmygodohmygodohmygod they kissed! Anyhows, enough of my musings on the story. _ Although it is excellent. Anyhows, people stalk your brother? Poor brother... Yay, I can't wait to read more about Michael and Donna's relationship. It sounds like there's more behind this relationship than meet the eye. Now, the question is, will Michael be able to let go of his first love to accept his second love? God, I hope he accepts the fact that he wasn't the one who killed Donna in the first place. Lol! _ I'm glad you agree with me. Although I've never really thought about how long it takes for the mass transit system to get to where you are. God, it's hell sometimes. Anyhows, yeah, there are really REALLY freaky people riding buses at times. Like one time, I was sitting behind this woman who's hair smelled NASTY! (Imagine sticking your head down a toilet after someone pooped, peed, and diarrheaed in it. Definitely not a happy smell nor happy person.) Whoa...freaky guy...maybe he was in a fight. It's freaky anyway! And he was eating CHICKEN? For crying out loud dude, you're practically bleeding to death and you decide, "hm, I'm gonna eat chicken today." Ah well...that's probably what a normal guy would do. To them, food is food and food comes whenever and always before anything else. It's a saddening thing. And the dude tried to sit next to you? GAH! I'm so praying that I never get Ms. Rowland as a drivers ed teacher. She's not only colorblind (as confirmed by both u and me) and a bit messed up in the head (delightful insight from yours truly) Yeah, maybe you should take a steering wheel and bonk Ms. Rowland's head against it in an attempt to knock sense into her, and some common sense knowledge about the 21st century. How about if I poke a...*rummages through purse*...eye curler in Miranda's eye and yell in her ear for her to not like Michael? Or better yet, I'll use the drill. Anyhows, UPDATE! Please? *Orient Fox* |
![]() ![]() Wow ... ... there's only one word to describe this chapter. hot Hot HOT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw.. this chapter is just too cute for words.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah you are really good at describing those interestying scences ... brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, this story is getting really good. ive been following it for a while and i simply love it. if you need to know anything about south california just ask. im from Los Angeles and i know the southern part of my state pretty well. okay, well please update soon! |
![]() ![]() Great story i love it i love it. Keep updating regulary. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Ciao |
![]() ![]() Hm...I live like, right by Portland, Oregon. I don't hang out there much because I'm a sheltered girl and stay home most of the time. Heh heh. But I do know some of the locations of stuff. I do know that their concert would be at the Roseland theater (if you're planning on having them come to Portland, don't know. Heh heh) Hm...don't know anything about clubs, but a lot of people go shopping at Pioneer sqaure, which is like, a four story mall (can't remember HOW many stories it has) that is sort of small, because it just goes up, up, up. Heh heh. And there's tons of shops outside of the mall, like streets and streets of them . But yeah, that's all I really know about portland. I think you could do a little research with those names though. Environment, depedning on the month it's mostly rainy hear. In june, july august, september it's sunny most of the time. October it starts to rain again. Lots of goths in this area, and Portland is like Queenland of ameteur porn. Lol. Not that I'm involved in THAT or anything. Heh hehh. So anyways, on with your story! It was so GREAT! I loved this chapter to pieces. The ending...*perfect*! Lol. They finally kissed, but i have a feeling Michael's gonna act weird for a moment. But at least your readers feel a little bit better that they kissed. I absolutely adored the scene with Alyssa. I think it's one of your best yet. She's just the cutest character ever. At first I was kinda pissed with Michael for his trying to push Jessica away, and I know he would be furious if another guy were to try to pick her up! So contradictory. Anyways, all is better, for the time being though. I'm sure you'll add mucho chaos and it will be just wonderful! Lol. So yeah. Great job, as usual. Update soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey guess what! When I saw your name on the author alert i jumped up and down for like 10 minutes with a HUGE smile on my face... Then I realized that I should go and actually read the chapter... Not too athletic huh? My coach got really mad at the officials and wrote a formal protest and sent it to like oklahoma... (i'm in connecticut) since they tried to make us play for so long and so now we're probably going to have to redo that tournament... he had a really hard time not just bursting out and swearing at them... hehe it was funny trying to watch him restrain himself... hey look! 17 chapters later, and they finally kiss! so april's going to show up soon right? c'mon... we all know jess can take her... update soon! (i'll jumped around in excitement again...) |
![]() ![]() that is so sweet! i think that it's even more romantic that they DIDN'T kiss, then if they had, but i can't wait until they do! *deep sigh* i love the smell of romance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I unstand it all now! and I can;t wait to see what she does now! |
![]() ![]() So Mike's facade is beginning to crack. Very cool. |