Reviews for Made To Dance Together
myworks87 chapter 10 . 5/29/2004
Woo-hoo! So I tried reading this chapter again this lovely Saturday morning and all is well! The entire thing loaded when I went to read it! YAY YAY! I'm so excited because the best part of it, was included in the not loading section. But it's all loaded! Yay! Can you tell I'm excited? Just a little bit maybe...heh heh. And this chapter was great too! Ohmigosh! He played basketball with her! That is so cool...and I loved the line when Jessica asked why guys always ask girls to play one-on-one and Michael was like to flirt with them. Heh heh. That was priceless. I bet it was the truth with him too, even if he hadn't intended it that way. Secretly he SO WANTS her. And no Michael mystery revealed in this chapter...sigh...I was hoping for a bone. Heh heh. BUt all will reveal in good time I suppose. How long are you planning on making this story? The way you write already takes things slowly and very detailed (yeah!) and you still have a lot to cover before the story would end. I don't want it to end, if you were wondering. Heh heh. Naw, I'm just a curious type and wondering how long I'll get to enjoy this story from you! I'm pleased that my reviews actually MAKE you want to update. It is my attention, along with giving you compliments and critique. The only thing I wanted to change in this story was to have more Michael in it. ANd you've certainly done that with this story. So yeah for you! hmm...oh I liked the dance scene in this. When she was doing her freestyle and had the whole crowd cheering. Stasia may be the highlight of the night, but Jess needs her time to shine as well. And she blew Michael away. Heh hehh heh. There's some of that competition to be the best dancer...all in good fun. They should choreograph a dance together...for what purpose I don't know. But it'd still be fun. Heh heh. Oh and BTW I'm really excited to graduate...oh in about a YEAR! Gah! Heh heh. Oh well, I hear senior year is better than junior year. But who knows, they may just tell me that to keep me motivated for another year. Cursed, cursed high school!
hgdgkhljklfesjhgfjghkhgk chapter 10 . 5/29/2004
this chapter was even better! im glad shez starting to belong, itz nice to belong. really nice. ok sry lol. updATE soon
JemG chapter 10 . 5/29/2004
Great chapter, you got in a lot of background info and connected everyone, good job.
lilleo chapter 10 . 5/29/2004
yeah, deff a quick enough update, still doin great so i hope ya dont go on holiday ne time soon!
Sheen chapter 10 . 5/29/2004
I have been following your story for quite some time and really just wanted to let you know that I absolutely love it! Being a fan of dancing (although my dancing days are over), it's really easy to emphatise with Jessica ... ... And the chemistry between Michael and Jessica is simmering, especially because of the mystery shrouding Michael. Your story rocks ... ...
My Works 87 chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
Hey...I read part of chapter 10, but the entire thing didn't load. I don't know if it's a fictionpress error that you can try to fix or not. But just thought I'd let you know about it. And when I can read the entire thing, I'll give you a proper review. Toodles.
decree of fate chapter 9 . 5/27/2004
wow...jessica & miranda are really going at kyle's still funny as usual or at least to me he is :) he's my favorite character...update soon! it was awesome!
VioletReverie chapter 9 . 5/27/2004
i could tear miranda's hair out of her head! she's so damn annoying...but u did a great job carrying out her personality throughout the story.
im so happy that michael sided jessica, there's so much unknown about lovin it! jessica's sure damn lucky to have him on her side...but wait, what if he just sided because of stacia? oh no..(duhn, duhn, duhn, duhn)i hope not, but then i kinda do...stacia seems like a really kind and caring person, but so does jessica and i want michael to take that side because of both of them...(reviewer's selfish thinking) anyway, kyle's so adorable! i love him! he's so carefree, yet he's so caring...i wish there were more people like him in the world...but then again i kind of don't wish that...everything would be just a big joke.
you're doing a really good job with this, i have absolutely no constructive critism...(i probably wouldn't even have any if i tried...*i failed english plenty of times*) and keep up with the great writing.
also, this was a pretty fast update...i think im beginning to get spoiled... _ hope u update again soon...whenever u finish is awesome too, theres really no need to rush, right? us antsy readers will just have to wait... :)
Inky Moonbeams chapter 9 . 5/26/2004
This story is absolutely amazing so far. I have to say I was speechless. I've read many stories and this, honestly, is one of the best out there. I'm looking forward to reading more. By the way, I love Jessica and her friends, you've done a great job developing them.
Sunne chapter 9 . 5/26/2004
I would agree with you on that one...drama make a good story excellent. I can't wait for Jessica's first performance...even I'm nervous. I also wonder what will happen when her issue with her parents does come out...if anything will change between the dancers that are now divided.
keep's really good :)
Jenina chapter 9 . 5/26/2004
"Wonderful! The conflicts of teenagers are always fun to read about. Sometimes, you can put yourself in the character's place and relate, and sometimes you can't. Realisticness is one of your fortes. Keep writing!"
-Daimone Liath, chief editor of the [High Up] newspaper for the LR High School.
Personal (sp?) Note: You're very welcome. I like your story! Yeah, I was co-chief this year, but now that the other co-chief is going to college (he's a senior), I take over as chief next year! D I have to make reviews like that one. I run a section on the third page on Book Reviews and parts of the Sports section, but I edit the whole newspaper with my two assistant editors, Kaylin and James. It's a big deal and I keep on going out of habit on doing that type of book review, so Kaylin suggested that I do that type of review on . Ta-tA!
Grace Hsia chapter 9 . 5/26/2004
My're making me scared of High School! That freaky dance teacher dude? Yeah...there's one at my school too...only I don't have him yet...and he's almost exactly like how you described him...Mr Mallory. Freaky...and he's not forcing us to perform in front of the school. Yet. I suppose that will happen in time. Oh my gosh, thank you! You're actually one of hte other peoples in this world that hate sharing private facts in front of the class. Ahem, take my health class for example. My teacher is Mrs. Geiz... and she's EVIL. First day, everyone is all happy, and we are all sitting in class happily until Mrs. Geiz is like, "Alright class, share facts about yourself. I'll start first. I'm blah blah blah and I have 2 kids blah blah blah and I love eating rice." Why do we need to know this? And then, she goes, "Now, let's go down the rows and have each of us share some facts." URGH! Who cares if so and so over there can tap dance? It's not going to "bring our class closer together." Thank god that it was only one day! You had to do it EVERYDAY? Poor you! Ugh. And then forcing you guys to perform, I think the guy had fumes finally go to his head or something. I feel so bad for you guys! At least it's over now. Did you have to have a big group performance or do dances one at a time? I swear, teachers plan things to humiliate students on PURPOSE! They had sucky childhoods, so they want to ruin ours. Ek. You have a scary high school. And yes, you do need a new laptop. That sounds sad! You're computer doesn't even save properly? Wow, that's really sad. And I thought I had problems. (STUPID TECHNOLOGY!) Isn't technology supposed to make my life easier? Then why isn't it? Urgh. That's one of life's other unsolved mysteries. Anyhows, UPDATE soon!
Love this story! It really rocks and this chapter was another examples of excellent writing that I will never be able to reach. _
*Orient Fox*
Drifting Rose Petal chapter 9 . 5/26/2004
wow! i read ur story all the way through and I love it!1 Very nice job on it, I saw a few grammer errors and spelling errors but nothing that cant be fixed if you decide to publish it) update soon
lilleo chapter 9 . 5/26/2004
heya kool next chapter - HURRY UP AGAIN! btw im kinda finicity and i know liek computers r annoying n stuff but i always speel lilleo with a lil l it doesnt matter though, just thought id say!
Zeina chapter 9 . 5/26/2004
Really like the story. It's getting better. I have a feeling there,s gonna be hell to pay when Jess and Michael hook up.
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