Reviews for Made To Dance Together
SockBrain chapter 9 . 5/26/2004
wow- this is definitely flowing better! A visible improvement from chapter 1- congrats.
Well, I'm hoping to see more Micheal-Jessica action. It's been pretty limited and I'm geting led up of dark-and-mysterious (that's a good thing because it shows you're doing your job as the writer).
My Works 87 chapter 9 . 5/25/2004
Oh yay! You updated. YAY YAY YAY! I was SO wanted you to. Scratch that. I STILL want you to update...again! Heh heh. I'm so demanding, I know. Gah! I really shoudl start my homework, but I'd rather read your story. I wish I was out of high school. It is so drama-rama. Pathetic really. And stupid. And did I mention that I have a strong distate for the institution? Heh hehh...anways
I really enjoyed this chapter. I was surprised to see a guy side with Miranda and co. I would think guys would stay objective to girl cat fights. But I guess not. And it's strange that Miranda should be so quiet about the dating. Let's see. We know A.) She doesn't have a boyfriend. B.) She doesnt' want to talk about that fact. C.) She likes Michael. D.) Something about this week, location, or setting has Michael in a rough time. E.) Michael is mysterious. I can't help but think there is some innerconnection with that all. But perhaps not. Maybe it's each to his/her own story. Who knows. I'm just confused about the whole not usually going to clubs. I suppose it may not be directly goin to clubs, but instead just going out. Having fun. Acting young and wihtout cares. Well...the mystery shall be resolved slowly, I hope. No rushing it in one fowl swoop. Anyways.. that's all for my rambling today. Thanks for updating and update again soon, please. This story rocks, literally!
Jenina chapter 8 . 5/24/2004
"A truly captivating story, 'Made to Dance Together' deserves all the attention that it will get. The characteristics of each character are very much realistic and focuses on the usual troubles that young adults face every day. This chapter deserves a full five stars!"
-Daimone Liath, chief editor of the [High Up] newspaper of LR High School
faithfuldescent chapter 8 . 5/24/2004
I totally love this story. One of my favorites now. It's hilarious and interesting. At first I didn't really want to read it because of the summary. I know don't judge the book by it's cover but the summary just didn't catch my attention that much. And I usually don't read it unless I'm sure that I would like it because I've wasted a lot of time reading crappy ones. Though this one is definitely good. I love michael. I like the way you describe him. He isn't the gorgeous pretty boy who you would definitely fall head over heels for but he does have some sort of charm that attracts the opposite sex. I like that.
VioletReverie chapter 8 . 5/24/2004
aw...this is a really good chapter...i would really like to get to know more about michael, but i assume that ill get to know more about him soon enough...i like the fact that you made him kind of mysterious and withdrawn, it completely contrasts with jessica's fun-loving and open personality, therefore making them the perfect couple...after all, opposites do attract, but maybe there's more to michael then meets the eye (?)...anyway, you have me hooked to this story by now i can't wait for the next chapter...oh and by the way...THANK YOU SO MUCH for reviewing my story... _ (and thanks for the recognitions in your chapters...i really appreciate it :) !)
Sunne chapter 8 . 5/23/2004
Another awesome chapter. Some of those girls need to drop the attitude's very immature. Hehe, and Kyle is great!
decree of fate chapter 8 . 5/22/2004
lol...i luv kyle :) he's my favorite character well right now...i liked the ending! :) um...the smokers & the boys are icky stage sound interesting
lilleo chapter 8 . 5/22/2004
hey this story is great! i love dancing myself, (even tho im crap at it n dont tell ne 1 or show ne 1 or ne thing!) sothis story really appeals to me. great writing i hope you update soon!
Zeina chapter 8 . 5/22/2004
Wow! Feeling the heat there!
myworks87 chapter 8 . 5/21/2004
Hm...I like the Slam Book story the most. Kinda cute sounding, although entirely cruel as well. Oh what fun. And this chapter was so great. One of your best yet. And see, things turned out better for Jessie, since she got to go to a club with Michael instead of out with some bitchy girls and a couple that just follow their "friends". Grr...Miranda pisses me off. But I like that you make her antagonistic without it always having to be confrontation. The scene on the bus (or was it in a hotel was good). Realistic. It reminded me of this girl that I totally despise, but who's all nice and friendly with one of my friends. I always want to rip her hair out! Oh...calm down child. Anyways, I loved the club scene. And Billy seemed a bit suprised that Michael went to the club. Maybe he met a girl there and got all romantic with her but then she dumped him. Thus he doesn't like clubs, 'cuz of what it led to, and he focuses on his job since a girl broke his heart. Poor guy. Now I'm feeling sorry for reasons that I don't even know are true. Oh I'm so silly! So update again soon chica. I love that the two of them are starting to feel attraction that maybe wasn't entirely present to begin with. But dancing is a very sensual thing, so who wouldn't start to feel some magnetism? I surely would. Especially with someone like Michael. Grr...I love that dark hair greenish eyes (hazel counts) look. It's startling, since dark eyed people usually have brownish eyes. Well, most commonly. Well, that's all my rambling for now. I love this story and I would LUH-ove it if you updated again very soon. You're pretty regular and I'd like to give you kudos for that! Yay for updating. Now I should work on my next chapter. Should the key word here...
Grace Hsia chapter 8 . 5/21/2004
Yes, I love this story! Seriously, you describe these clubs as though you went to them, which I find totally awesome. As for me, well, I wouldn't be able to dance if my life depended on it. There is no way that anyone can drag me onto a dance floor, unless it's for slow dancing. Lol! I seriously can't dance. Yeah, at least you've taken a dance class recently...I did take a dance class. Unfortunately, I took the dance class when I was like seven or five...and seven/five year olds don't get very good dance routines or teachings. My dance, I remember, was basically about waving your arms about and singing about a little duck and flapping your arms madly. _ Thank you! Another immature mature person in this world. There are not enough old ppls in this world who stay happy and fun. This was so close to a dance off! I was like YES! There's going to be a dance off...and then splat. My hopes were dashed. But then... you mentioned that you would have a real one later. YAY! *perks up immediately* I understand about your problems with your laptop...I hates me. Take exhibit a: my printer. It looks like an ordinary printer but it's this diabolical fiend on the inside. I was trying to print this thing really early one morning, my Gettysburg Address analyzation, and the printer just starts printing weird messages like, "Hello; How are you today?; Good morning; How do you feel?" You get the picture. Then, this other time, I was changing the ink cartridge when it got all over my hands! What the heck? They're not supposed to do that! Of all the ink cartridges, I GET THE DEFECTIVE ONE. Gr...and then...there was that other time where I changed the ink cartridge when I wasn't supposed to and got my printer messed up. Then, my little sister (She's a genius with technology.*Gapes in awe*) fixed it. I was so happy, and I tried to print the report that I had to do. I do the usual...and press the okay button, and I was basically staring happily at the printer like the fool I was expecting it to print. But no...the printer started shooting out these blank pages. Where had these come from? About 20 blank pages shot out in the end...and then there was the incident at school. My friend Rashmi and I were working on a science project and we really needed to get something printed. So, first we send it to the printer, only to see that we didn't press okay. So, we run back to the printer, only to see an error message on it asking for more paper. So, we put more paper in, and we press the reprint button. Then, the stupid thing jams, and Rashmi and I are basically standing there staring at it with our mouths gaping open. We finally got the thing printed, but there was a one inch stack (I'm serious, it was scary) of papers by the printer. Last but not least (I swear it's the last anecdote today!) was when Rashmi and I were doing this statistics project. We had to get a graph printed on the computer. First, the printer doesn't print, and we realize that it wasn't plugged in after about 15 minutes. So...we plug it in and cross our fingers hoping for our graph to print or else we would get an F. Picture two ppl staring at a printer...and a look of amazement crosses their face when they see a sheet of paper being printed. They lift it up in triumph and it turns out that it was a seriously messed up test print copy. URGH! Anyhows, I like The Boys are Icky Stage story, which sounds really intriquing, so that gets a 4. Next would be Squaky Clean-Ville, with a 3. Then, The Slam book with a 2, and then The Smokers with a 1.
twitched chapter 1 . 5/20/2004
sorry it's taken me so long to get around to reading this. I know you asked me in your first review and I've been meaning to since then but every time I'm about to read it one of my siblings just has to do something on the computer or make me read a map or something... anyway, I'm rambling and I mean to be talking about the story, which is excellent so far by the way! And I'm sure it will continue to be excellent through all the other chapters that you have up. I just thought I'd live you a review at the end of this chap so that if I do get kicked off you know that I've been reading it. Anyway, I can't wait to learn more about Jessica and everyone else so I'm going to read more.
Grace Hsia chapter 7 . 5/18/2004
I love this story! It portrays things so's amazing. ,[O bows down to the awesome author.
You're not truly a dancer are you?
Just kidding! I seriously like this story though, and I'm sorry that I didn't write you a review earlier. *Bows head guiltily* Ah well...that's why this is being written. This is one awesome story! I like it a lot, and I was so mad about how I didn't get a fictionpress update alert thingie. Gr...DIE TECHNOLOGY DIE! Do Michael and Jessica have a dance off? That would be so cool..._
Anyhows, sorry, dumb idea. Ah well! I agree with you, on not writing from Michael's POV...because it would be so hard to capture his cold, haughty demeanor perfectly.
Your story ROCKS! _
*Orient Fox*
Ever-White Rose chapter 7 . 5/18/2004
Wowo that's really good... better than anything ive written so far.
Keep reviewing!
Sunne chapter 7 . 5/17/2004
this is a really cool and original story...please update soon!
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