Reviews for Made To Dance Together
decree of fate chapter 7 . 5/17/2004
:) so now it luv it! aww kyle's great :-D and alyssa too! update soon!
decree of fate chapter 6 . 5/17/2004
:) still working my way through this...i luv it!
decree of fate chapter 5 . 5/17/2004
wow...go jessica! aww her friends are hilarious..esp kyle!
myworks87 chapter 7 . 5/15/2004
Oh yay! You updated! I hope now that they are on tour, there will be more Michael. Though it's pretty cool that I get to know his character through other people. It makes it more mysterious, 'cause you don't know what is the truth, or what is people's exaggerated opinions. Ya know? But I do wish to see some of him in this story (obviously) heh heh. And Jessica is really cool. I actually like Michael's sister the best though, 'cause she's laid back and relaxed. She's friendly and not a cat with sharp claws. I hope you don't wait too long to give us the explanation of Michael though-and why it was so strange for him to approach a girl at a bar. I'm assuming it has something to do with a past relationship turned sour...because of the whole "anyways, I asked know what, nevermind..." bit. I'm really curious now! Okay, I'm so curious I'm practically DYING of it! Please, please please don't take too long to at least give the readers a nibble as to what she meant. I like the mystery behind his character. And I'm sure it does well to explain things. Hmm...and the less Miranda, the better. Oh just joking...sort of. Antagonism is good, but it can so easily be overdone. You've done an excellent job so far though girlie. I'm very impressed with the details and well-rounded characters that you've developed. Really impressed. I find it so hard to balance a lot of characters when I write (which isn't that often. bad girl) anyways...good job. UPDATE soon. ANd this update was good, I think one to two weeks wait is average and acceptable. Of course, I usually take three to five weeks. Gawrsh I'm horrible. But oh takes me FOREVER to write a chapter. LIke four hours to type it, then there is the editing. ANd that doesn't even include deciding what I'm gonna PUT in the chapter. What can I say? I'm slow... heh heh. But this really isn't about me. It's about you! So update! And do as I say, not as I do. Heehe
decree of fate chapter 4 . 5/15/2004
oh wow..i luv alyssa & lisa! miranda is such a witch minus the w add a b...great! :)
decree of fate chapter 3 . 5/15/2004'm not sure what I would have done in jessica's place...but anyway it was great!
byellarose chapter 6 . 5/14/2004
Awesome chapter...i think i read it a while ago, im not too sure, but im reviewing now :) hope u continue soon...this is a really good story...
crazilazigurl chapter 6 . 5/13/2004
thank you so much for that wonderful review...i will so read your awesome...thanks!
decree of fate chapter 2 . 5/6/2004's great :) i luv elias..he really cares for her ) great characters...still working my way through this
SockBrain chapter 2 . 5/4/2004
oh, she has to go on tour! I wanna skip a few chapters to find out, but I need to go study. humph. oh well, you'll be hearing from me later:)
Sami chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
OH MY GOSH! I love's flippin awesome!I saw that and I just had to say something!
Arialla chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
Hey! Thanks for reviewing my story (and adding it to favorites)! I make it a point to review my reviewers’ stories, so that’s how I found your fic. Great job writing! This is really interesting! Keep up the great work!
~ Aria
kkolay chapter 6 . 5/1/2004
i really like where this story is going. you are a great writer, keep it up. (:
Jenina chapter 6 . 5/1/2004
If you want to use Fire Daimone, go ahead. Or you can call me Liath if you still want to. Yeah, I changed my name. I'm probably going to change it again sometime soon (hehe, don't ask...i get into those moods). It's a freak coincidence...Whew! And my name starts with 'Je', another coincidence! Kyle is my best friend, followed by Alyssa. Isn't it weird that girls usually get along better with guys than other girls? Well, that goes for me at least. I see it goes for Jessica too! The thing about having guy friends is that you never fight over the same guy...unless your guy friend is gay, of course, but that's beyond what I'm trying to say. I don't have a thing against gays, topic...Lol, anyways...
myworks87 chapter 6 . 5/1/2004
Wow. You updated EARLY! I like that. YOu should update early more often. What da ya say? Heh heh. ANd thanks for letting me pull out Miranda's hair. ANd I'm glad you didn't put her in this chapter. If she was in every chapter it would get really annoying, ya know? And I think it's hilarious that Miranda has a thing for Michael. Who knows, maybe he likes her too, but he CERTAINLY didn't omit that sort of vibe. If anything, it sounds like Michael likes Stasia. ALthough more in a brotherly way than in a romantic one. And I like that neither of the main characters are falling instantly head-over-heels with each other. If anything, they seem a little wary of each other, Jessica being the new girl who has talent that definitely rivals Michael's. It shall be interesting if nothing else! ALthough I'm sure there will be much more else. I wouldn't mind either if Jessica formed a relationship with one of the other guy dancers, because they're all cool (some more egotistical than others however) and it wouldn't be some grand new thing for her to like one. Plus, it'd add our favorite word TENSION! Heh heh. But you do whatever you want, it is your story after all! I'm just the reviewer who likes to rant and make meaingless suggestions! Heh heh. So great chappie. I loved the part where he was helping her with the step. It's funny how he can make her lose her reserve. Doesn't happen much to her 'eh? Well, new emotions always are fun aren't they? I'd love it if you interceded a few parts that were from Michael's point of view too, but I agree with you (I was reading other review responses) and I don't think an entire chapter from his point of view would be good. honestly, this story is about Jessica's struggles. THe other characters, whether they are main or simply secondary ones have struggles that just add to the realism of this story. Well, I've ranted enough for one day. If you'd like, I'll rant again. Just update soon so I can, alright? Heh heh...
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