Major kudos for character depth and developments, plot twists and development. A wonderful romance story, to say the least. It was truly an enjoyable read.

In regards to constructive criticism, I feel the need to point out a few different things. Sentence structure and grammar was for the most part individually flawles. When reading through however, there was a marked lack of flow, or ease of reading. Editing for polish by varying sentence structures and pronoun use would dramatically increase the smooth flow of the prose. Also, while your talent for dialogue is very strong and flows naturally, your descriptive language in creating emotional involvement and settings sometimes seems slightly abrupt.

Like I said in the beginning, though, this story, and your talent for writing, are intriguing enough to snag a reader and your plot twists and development trap the audience like a snare wire. An undeniably lovely read, overall, and I look forward to reading your next work... hopefully soon? :)

that was the best story ever! do u have any more?

awesome story

update soon

update soon

I LOVED this book. If you would write a sequel you would make me a VERY happy person!

OH MY GOD! it was so awesome! i loved it! haha i read it all in one day! i was so mad when i had to stop for dinner! anyway, i was reading your comment to a review in this last chapter where you said that it could be made into a movie and it deffinately could! if it was ever was or ever published, i would like force people to buy it! haha anyway, that was great! now i just wish that you would write more stories! ...a sequel would be nice...haha im just kidding! even though it would. :)

hahah! i love this story...and i thought it was hilarious how drew named the car! especially because my family names our cars too! AND i have a dog named stella! i was like, omg thats so weird! okay anyway thats about it...haha i think im going to read this whole thing in one sitting!

*sniff* this is a really great story - you should be proud of yourself!

oh wow ... oh wow... this is like the most amazing story ever! i just spent a whole day reading it! oh wow...

Wow. This is a fantastic story. The characters were deep and the plot was moving. The story was so realistic, esp the way the characters acted. Well done with this fab story!

OMG! I am soo crying right now! That was beyond the sweetest story I've ever read and all the plot was prefectly seamless! *wipes away tears* I'm so sad that it's the end, but I went immediately to check to see if you had another story and you didn't and now i'm crying again! You wrote an amazingly perfect story... maybe you should push to get it published... i'd get all of my friends to read it definately! Awesome job on the entire story i can't complain about a thing.

~*~*~Southern Siren~*~*~

Awesome story. loved the ending!

We Could Be Gone

This story is so cool! I love it so much. Anyway, you should write some other stories. You're a wonderful writer, and I would definately read anything else you wrote.

Awesome story

We Could Be Gone