Awesome story

We Could Be Gone

Hey, I'm not sure if I've reviewed this before, but if not, well, I am now.

I like how you made a romance work. Not many people can pull it off without boring their readers to tears. And yes, I knew Michael and Jessica were going to end up together, but you made it real, believable, and riddled with conflict. That's commendable - and very impressive. I don't know if you've disappeared or gone on hiatus, but I can't wait to see more work from you.

The only slight nitpick I feel the need to point out is that, besides dancing, there is little physical chemistry between Michael and Jessica. (I don't mean sex or anything like that, I'm not quite so lewd *g*) but the dancing is something special. As someone who doesn't dance, I was able to envision the scene well. Your descriptions are just right as well - not to much, not too little.

I know you updated this back in October, but again, I hope you continue to post things here. :)

I really loved this story! Great job on it!

Publish it! Email me when it gets excepted or before if you need moral support but I'm telling you, this NEEDS published! So I insist that you find yourself an agent and give this story to them! Do you have a sequel? I'm going to go find out!

Hey! I like your story so far. I was wondering, hopefully if your not offended,what race are your characters? They are extremely like real people, and you have great talent.

wah, it ended? XD i kinda skipped to the end, seeing as its 5 in the morning right now and ive been desperately trying to finish the story... but ill definately go back and finish it the rest later ;D

omg we both like the same tv showsomg i though i was the only one...do u like ADA Kite?

nice last line..a little corny for my taste..but i still liked it. lol. thank god michael reached to his senses. it was unfuriating me! agh..please update sooN! with an epilogue maybe? :D

oh! when it's over, you should write a sequel! Or at least do another story...I can't believe it's over! awesome story! one of my favorites of ALL TIME!

yay! You finished! But it's also sad...oh well. Awesome story! Get it published now so that I can read it anywhere, lol.(No, you really should work on like the grammer stuff and get it publsihed for real) Yayy! Fantastic!

The ending was perfect. Flawless. Great job; I hope you post another story soon! I’ll definitely check it out.
~ Aria

Ah, I love the last line! It completes it so weel. Glad to have read through it!

Ah! It was so good! And it's OVER? NO-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O! It can't be! Gah! What will I do without it? I'll die! No! Lol. OK. I'll chill. Man! When I saw the small bold "The End" I was like "No way...NO FRIGGIN WAY!" :) Oh my gosh you rock my world! Woo! I loved this story! So are you planning and starting a new story anytime soon? Because after this one I want MORE! Lol. But yeah...FP is pissing me off. It keeps doin that thing where it says there's somethin wrong with the server and I can't do my reviews and stuff. It's so annoying! Oh well. Hey! Guess what? I JUST WATCHED SAVE THE LAST DANCE YESTERDAY! Muahahaha! I just really needed to watch a dance movie and I figured ah, what the heck? I'll watch it. SO I DID! Lol. But yeah. THANK YOU FOR GIVING MICHAEL A NEW BRAIN! He really needed one and I was afraid he wouldn't get one in time for the next chapter. Lol. But yeah. He's not a dumb ass! Wo! Or an asshole! Or a friggin retard! Nope. He's Michael. Michael, Jessica's lover. And I love them both. And I love this story. And I'm gonna go now. And bye.

THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER! I LOVE IT! WOHO!

OMG! I can't believe it's really over! Your story was really awesome! You did a good job "long awaited talk" too lol Loved your story! : )