"...treehouse of words"
Love that phrase, Crescent. Esh, I've missed reading and writing. Been way too busy and stuck with a case of unmotivation & writer's block. -_- But it's lovely I've gotten a chance to check up on this piece of yours.
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I could be wrong, but I have the feeling that you have something specific for this "Wednesday" symbol - something personal to you, yes? Sure it could mean a lot of other things as well - that's the beauty of symbolism - but yeah, I just have that feeling. {shrugs} Anyway, keep writing!
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Jess 0:o)

oh... i like this, but i'm wondering exactly what the wednesday image has to do with it. is it just an average type day, or is it the specific middle meaning? i like this. i have noticed that you keep a similar format to all of your poetry, but manage to make it work. nice.

plus points because I think Wednesday is my day. :)
i think it's good, but you can still improve on it. you can try writing in freeverse and not rhyming any of the words. :) looking forward to your future work!