Reviews for Don't You Love America?
brookolas chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
I've read this whole poem over three times, and I must honestly say that I disliked every word of it. Mechanics wise, you completely disregard any rules of rhythm or rhyme, resulting in a mindless drabble about what you've so unitellgently observed and are now ranting about because you would like your own views heard. I cannot think of anything I despise more than people writing poems that are so abominably inaccurate and terribly written that it only helps to confirm my belief that the state of the common person's brain is rapidly deteriorating.
Eisley-Eyes chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
the mouse that roared chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
I agree. All the examples really add a lot; I've seen a lot of stuff that's just ranting and no substance. Good job.
Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 3/15/2004
yep i do. that was somewhat a protest ramble but it worked well in poem form, very effective. well done
lili brik chapter 1 . 3/3/2004
hehe...shouldn;t be funny (or classified under humor, really) but it;s both. good job...
Genevieve S chapter 1 . 2/29/2004
omg I didn't know YOU wrote that! I thought you said you found it somewhere.
As much as I hate saying anything bad about America, that poem is quite good.
Nice one ::claps::
queerromance chapter 1 . 2/28/2004
I agree with everything you said in this poem! Could you please r&r mine!
Bitten Caliban chapter 1 . 2/27/2004
Brilliant. My absolute favourite.
Ironic, powerful, and so true.
I have no negative comments. Wonderful job. Good luck