Reviews for True Forbidden Love
StoneFeather chapter 1 . 3/22/2004
Very short. Not enough description. Very rushed. Do it over, I suggest, and give us more description. If you were telling me this story verbally, I doubt that you would have even taken a breath. It was almost as if you wanted to get it over quickly; as if it was a bad taste in your mouth. That makes it bad. Good idea, but badly written.
Thatz Foreman chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
i am right there with the Bush thing, but the story was totally rushed...try writing something over chapters and it'll be really great
Chaloux chapter 1 . 2/28/2004
Dude, you're right on with the Bush hating humaity thing. And the lesbian scene was very nice. I like it, but it was kinda short for a long story line.I guess i'm trying to say is the story felt rushed.. but it's good. Nice work.