Reviews for I Refuse to Fall
moi chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
hm... interesting... what's a haiku? tell me more the next time we meet kz? ;) yupz, n cheer up!~!
A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 3/1/2004
Such deep meaning for that person (if there is one)... keep writing... hope to see more...
Emerald Lynne Stonne chapter 1 . 3/1/2004
This is good... especially for your first peice. I like the last line... Very heartfelt! Great Job, Keep Writing!
~~*Emmy*~~
Franken chapter 1 . 2/29/2004
Hmm... That was pretty good, just one thing is that maybe you could find a way to change either the end of your first or last line. Fall at the end of both kind of sounds a little wierd, other than that, cool!

~~Franken~~
BobReid chapter 1 . 2/29/2004
Haikus are so short, but usually so much is said in those 3 lines. Good job, it was well written. I can really feel the emotion.
nacay chapter 1 . 2/28/2004
it is hard for me to review haikus sorry.