Reviews for If I were
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
I like it..simple, but meaningful.
lronMaiden chapter 1 . 2/29/2004
that sounds like it has a lot of meaning and depth to it - but it just doesnt have that poetic ring to it. Perhaps if you reordered and changed your words it would. On the other hand, if it's not meant to BE poetry, it's quite good!
ps. if you get the time and if you want to, please check out some of my own work. Thanx!