|Reviews for Excelsior Isn't On The Guest List|
| rocket baby doll chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
i loved it, your whole writing style, tis so.. undefined? i unno, its great, makes me happy..:P
| Mime chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
Hmm, very interesting. This is a pretty solid poem...I can't say anything 'cept you did a great job as usual.
| imxnotxyourxstar chapter 1 . 2/29/2004
Wow...that was fantastic. I loved style of this one, with alternating the stanzas from the girl to the boy. The last two stanzas were great, they ended this poem perfectly. Keep up the great work!