Reviews for Song Bird |
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Seeing Starz chapter 1 . 3/1/2004 The word glide is used twice to describe the same thing, maybe you should use another adjective. In the 5th line I think you menat strings not stings. In the 3rd stanza 4th line, "sound" just doesn't seem right. maybe a word like come would fit better. Overall it is a pretty good poem. *Seeing Starz* |
Prism Cage chapter 1 . 3/1/2004 GREAT poem, very nice |
soulfulsin chapter 1 . 3/1/2004 I like the simile of a knife through butter and a bow across strings, but I think it would have been more effective if you had worked it throughout your poem, instead of in just one stanza. |