Reviews for Cry I die
TTG chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
nice poem strong meaningdifferently writtenkeep on writing
Skaprunk chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
lovely. almost primitive, in a way but beautiful i love it
clear solution chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
Not bad at all, tho so depressive. I like it.
Sammy- B chapter 1 . 12/10/2004
it's short, but i think you expressed a lot through only a few words, and its sad :( ...

okay, bye.

Skittles1 chapter 1 . 10/31/2004
wow that was very good!
mark chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
ohg!that was so touching babe!love ur poetry
Anomander chapter 1 . 10/15/2004
I guess this is the opposent of "You screwed it all". It's much more warmer in telling your feelings. I like this mostly because it's more melancholic (it's my way when making an angsty poem - and believe me, there are lots of those). Good description of you feelings - this is your main characteristic.
A SeveredHead chapter 1 . 9/25/2004
interesting. good job! keep writing!
bittersweet angel chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
I like this poem because of the unique way in which it is written and the way how you have managed to express yourself fully anfd yet kept the poem short.
Arcania chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
Very interesting poem. I like it, short sweet, and full of holes that can be read into. Who are the holes for you?
atrava -poison chapter 1 . 5/20/2004
its short but i think its really good
IHearVoices chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
confusing...but totally deep!
shinco chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
I liked that a lot! VERY cool job! _
Silk Weaker chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
"you is I need"? I know it's trying to keep with the rhytm, but a little bit of grammar won't help. I'm not saying is bad of course, make no mistake, just trying hop off the bandawagon of people screaming "OMG IT'S FRIGGIN GREAT I LOVE YOU" whether it's good or not. I personally like it, and that's saying alot.
lalamushu chapter 1 . 4/3/2004
this is a good poem. good job! _ thanks for reviewing my piece. _
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