|Reviews for Cry I die|
| TTG chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
nice poem strong meaningdifferently writtenkeep on writing
| Skaprunk chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
lovely. almost primitive, in a way but beautiful i love it
| clear solution chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
Not bad at all, tho so depressive. I like it.
| Sammy- B chapter 1 . 12/10/2004
it's short, but i think you expressed a lot through only a few words, and its sad :( ...
| Skittles1 chapter 1 . 10/31/2004
wow that was very good!
| mark chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
ohg!that was so touching babe!love ur poetry
| Anomander chapter 1 . 10/15/2004
I guess this is the opposent of "You screwed it all". It's much more warmer in telling your feelings. I like this mostly because it's more melancholic (it's my way when making an angsty poem - and believe me, there are lots of those). Good description of you feelings - this is your main characteristic.
| A SeveredHead chapter 1 . 9/25/2004
interesting. good job! keep writing!
| bittersweet angel chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
I like this poem because of the unique way in which it is written and the way how you have managed to express yourself fully anfd yet kept the poem short.
| Arcania chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
Very interesting poem. I like it, short sweet, and full of holes that can be read into. Who are the holes for you?
| atrava -poison chapter 1 . 5/20/2004
its short but i think its really good
| IHearVoices chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
confusing...but totally deep!
| shinco chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
I liked that a lot! VERY cool job! _
| Silk Weaker chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
"you is I need"? I know it's trying to keep with the rhytm, but a little bit of grammar won't help. I'm not saying is bad of course, make no mistake, just trying hop off the bandawagon of people screaming "OMG IT'S FRIGGIN GREAT I LOVE YOU" whether it's good or not. I personally like it, and that's saying alot.
| lalamushu chapter 1 . 4/3/2004
this is a good poem. good job! _ thanks for reviewing my piece. _