Reviews for The Overwhelming Heart
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 3/17/2004
an epic battle again is fought. everyday is an epic battle for me. you wrote it out so well. If you have the chance, please review some of my stuff! thanks.
i was a postcard chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
Wow! This is definitely one of your best. I regret not reading it earlier when I got an email from my author alerts. I absolutely love the imagery in this. Every line was positively inspired, especially these:
"Like virus to body, heart is to soul." (that's just genius)
"Naked visage of rage is worn,
The pain exhudes, and reason mourns"
Ah, everything was just great. GREAT work here!
EchoesOfReason chapter 1 . 3/5/2004
Damn this is nice! It holds so much of the human mind true and that's what I like! I think you should try writing a song along these same lines. It would turn out great I believe! This is amazing, I LOVE IT! Great job, take care, and good luck!
Love always,
A-Light-From-Your-Darkness
imxnotxyourxstar chapter 1 . 3/1/2004
Beautifully written, the rhyming was great. I loved the third stanza. Amazing poem!
Lsay312