Reviews for Violence on her Ex
Yoi chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
cool!~ evil. haha i din notice this poem of urs b4. aniwae do u still write?
Red-Suzaku chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
Haha. i think this is pretty cool. Very impressive, but very you too. :)
moi chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
woahz... thanx man, it's really great! the flow's good and it amazes me how you think up of all those words that rhyme yet fit in... yeah, i agree that the revenge can be felt, haha.. ;)
trinity-fire chapter 1 . 3/2/2004
hahahaha, that was good, I really liked it. espaecially the end, and the way that you described the way that you got revenge for your friend, thats a cool poem subject to write about
LegendaryPunk29 chapter 1 . 3/2/2004
you have very very interesting style of writing, and it impresses me a lot! i think u are very talented at this! Really nice work here, great job, keep writing!
If u can, please r and r some of my work, it will mean a lot to me
Thanks!
BlackFlights chapter 1 . 3/2/2004
A good poem overall. well written and as a girl the revenge was felt. But it sounded as if you almost wanted him dead (no only kidding) I'm not sure even though he was a complete git and your friend should have punched him square in the nose that he deserved skidding down the bus, men. but tht's not why I'm reviewing coz whats done is done. Great work.