Reviews for Life Fear
Lhunuial chapter 1 . 3/5/2004
This is really something I can identify with. I'm certain we all feel like this at one point in our lives. Beautifully written.
I love this:
This is where my life shall end,
For it is only life I fear.
pippin tomson chapter 1 . 3/4/2004
I love the rhyming in this poem. I love the sad touch that you added to the end. I like the way it was presented. You've done well. It sounds very beautiful when read. I love the feelingh that you skillfully conveyed, and it's not always easy to do that in ryhme.
pippin tomson
LegendaryPunk29 chapter 1 . 3/2/2004
Short and neat. I really liked it! great work here, I think u did very nice job saying wat u wanted to say! Nice work for real! keep writing~
If u can, please r and r some of my work, it will mean a lot to me