Reviews for Life Fear |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is really something I can identify with. I'm certain we all feel like this at one point in our lives. Beautifully written. I love this: This is where my life shall end, For it is only life I fear. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the rhyming in this poem. I love the sad touch that you added to the end. I like the way it was presented. You've done well. It sounds very beautiful when read. I love the feelingh that you skillfully conveyed, and it's not always easy to do that in ryhme. pippin tomson |
![]() ![]() ![]() Short and neat. I really liked it! great work here, I think u did very nice job saying wat u wanted to say! Nice work for real! keep writing~ If u can, please r and r some of my work, it will mean a lot to me Thanks! |