Heyo! I saw I'm on your favs list...jeez what can I say, I don't know who you are or what you like 'bout me? So I figured I'd look at your stuff. Nice ryhming. It sounds a *tiny* bit forced here & there & stops kinda at the end though. I dunno why but I like this, short, weird, well, hell it's about a feary so I'm happy. Rock on.
Rin

*sniff* That is sad. I like the story that's behind it. Very nice poem.

Hey-I think this is a really great poem! I liked how you described her crying.