Reviews for Oh God, I think I'm dying
Lhunuial chapter 1 . 3/5/2004
My God, this reminds me much of myself last year, when I had similar feelings. I hope you're feeling better. Things are not so dark when you look back at them you know.
Great poem, people can really identify with this.
Sa-ah chapter 1 . 3/3/2004
Wow, very well done. The way you put the words together... Man. You really express the way a person cries to the Father in that state. Nice job.
Velvet Reverie chapter 1 . 3/2/2004
I like this one. A part of me can relate and the other part of me (in reading this) wants to see the PASSION even more! Lovely words!
~Lonely Empty Eyes~
PS
Thanks for your review!