Reviews for Can you?
SuperGill chapter 1 . 3/5/2004
This is good. i was like this last week because i had a term paper due and i couldnt think of how to start it. keep it up.
August is supposed to be short. See the area of America i live in has this competition called "Power of the Pen" and at the competition we are given a topic and we have 45 minutes to write a story on the prompt. the prompt for "August" was "It was the coldest, snowiest January but . . ." and so this was made in 45 min. I liked it, so i posted it. tell me if you think i should take it off the net and rewrite it longer. Anyways, thanks for the reviews! Only you and somebody else have reviewed me more than a couple times!
r/r me sg