Reviews for First Impressions
Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
"Or tears that left scars without leaving a trace?" Stunning line, left me mindblown. Excellent work! (I'm terribly sorry for this awful review.)
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 4/2/2004
awesome poem. i love the rhyme scheme, similar to that of petrarchan sonnets. nice use of rhetorical questions as well. thought-provocative, and a good message you have conveyed here through you words. nice work. keep writing!
aalewis chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
Hm... Another great poem! Bit like your other one, rhythm wise, which was great, don't get me wrong. Yes the rhythm was very good. I though some of the lines didn't really relate to what the verse was supposed to be about, for the first two verses, but that could just be cause I have no imagination. The second two verses, however, where really good. Really, really good. I just loved both verses. Specially how you ended it, tying it in with the title, and leaving the reader hanging...(but in a good way)