|Reviews for Pain and Blood|
| sanenewworld chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
it's perfect x
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
I’m writing Thee this poem and white lights,
All of a sudden are extinguished black,
Upright two candles with a prayer soft,
Pick up a pen & recall words with tears.
¿Why is it women bleed and men go fight?
Aggression inwards expressing outwards,
Whether to one’s own skin or to another’s,
Pain that needs expression through blood cut’s red,
I don’t have magic palliatives my Dear,
Just fair hope Thou would consider looking,
Up at night’s starred glory full God’s missives,
Constellation glowing merry-go-round,
Or let day’s sun shine upon Thy scarred skin,
To let yellow warm Thy inner soul’s heart,
O Dear—I wish upon all that I possess,
For sweet continuance of Thy verses,
To hear Thy voice expressing life firmly,
Yes—I know—I’m insensitive—can’t feel,
Raw-edged sensations that Thy nerves surreal,
Bring up in desperation to Thy touch,
Though of late I’ve developed allergies,
To toxic insect bites will nearly kill,
& Drive me to Job’s irritations foul,
But I’m so strange that even that is Joy,
But please—O please Dearest,—no more damage,
For I do not think I could bear life,
Knowing that anyone is hurting Thee,
& Though I cannot feel Thy pain,—It Bleeds.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
wow, i know the feeling and can relate. well done!
| SeaVoi chapter 1 . 3/4/2004
interesting to say the least, I guess I'd have to here the music.
| Static Black chapter 1 . 3/3/2004
I like this alot though i dont think cutting yourself is right, i might want to shut it because i have at one time tried it but STILL.. good poem.