Maa...this is all your fault. -grumbles- I stayed up until three frickin' AM just to see how this turn out. Then I crumpled in bed and /dreamed/ about your damn story, too tired to write a review just then.

I have to say...I wasn't impressed with the first few chapters. There was a bit /too/ much Japanese; it made it seem...like, well, a really poorly-written anime. But I'm glad I kept to it, because as we progressed, your writing got better and better...

Rei. Well, what to say about him? The scene where he kisses Yui, well, /that/ got me jumping off my feet. It was utterly adorable...the perfect yaoi scene...only, Yui was a girl. As they progressed, I kept drifting over to Rei's side...wishing Yui would just tell him. It's not fair to him. He has a right to be utterly disgusted with her when she tells him, because if he were totally gay, then he'd realize that all those times he was fantasizing, kissing her, letting her touch him, all those times, it wasn't a boy as the thought- but a girl. It'd revolt him. But hopefully it won't turn out that way...

I'm hoping Yui opens her eyes and sees the potential she has of hurting him like that. She /has/ to tell him sooner or later- but as Yoshiki said, there was some hidden reason why they didn't want a girl- I'm sure that'll come into play soon.

As for Kei...well...he was better of as a memory. I must say...I have no patience for his character. I know Yui turned to Rei because she was ready to move on, but then Kei pops up in her life again and she goes off...with him. Leaving Rei. I guess maybe she really /did/ thought Rei was just a way to get away from Kei, though I'm hoping she might unearth some feelings for him, too...

Well, all I've got to say is...you've got me hooked. Completely and utterly hooked. However, it's almost been...well, it's been more than a year since you updated. Somehow, I think you might have given up on this story. I really hope it wasn't so. It's so hard to find good stories, especially on visual kei bands and such, and I've got to say that you've really grown into it. I'd be horribly saddened if you decided not to update this story. But, I'm grateful you did write what you did. It's really inspired me. So, I put you on my favorites and alerts, just in case, maybe, hopefully, you decide to update.

Please..for the love of all things good and great in this world..PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY! It'd be a pity if you didnt Awesome story, anyhow!

So good to see three new chapters since last time I checked. Is Rei gay or bi or just confused? Please continue.

Finish Story. ;.;

Call me nightpicky, but im a drummer and it bothers me, somewhere in like chapter thre theres a part were it said "hit the pedal so hard the snare drum etc." or whatnot, but the snare drum isnt pedal operated, your thinking of a base drum.

I assume this story died a quiet death. The tragedy. If the author does see this: please finish!

Waa! I'm left staring blankly at the screen - and just so you know it's 5am and I haven't gone to bed and my kids will probably wake up soon but I don't care because omg this was brilliant!

There were some things I didn't like in the first few chapters, I think mostly I felt you used a bit too much Japanese, which detracted from the flow a little. Of course if there is no english equivalent the Japanese should def. be used, but I felt like the first chapters were very fangirlish - mind you you still had me completely hooked. I also laughed at your boy Kisa - that was weird for me as I have a daughter named Kisa - helped when I read his full name ;). The flow (esp. of the more recent chapters) is brilliant, I couldn't stop reading!

I love Yui's dilemma, and how brilliantly you've written this - I love the sexual identity crisis, and can't wait to see how you resolve this. I'm putting it on my favourites list because really, I love it. Please update this soon!

Ack. Yui just cheated on Rei! O_O No~! What happens next? ;_; Update, please... The suspense is killing me... _ (Hehe... to tell you the truth, I've been coming back to this story for quite a while now but I didn't review so... _ Hehe... gomen...)

wow- just wow... in a good way of course. Excellent story- can't wait for the next chapter...

O_O. I like Kei, I really do... but I kinda pity Rei now lol. And yay update.

Wow. I can't say I didn't kinda expect them to get together, but that was quick. I like the way Yui both enjoyed it and fully realized it didn't have the best consequences. Can't wait for the next bit...

Livi

Again, a great chapter. I'll be sad to see the end, because Yui-chan has to choose some one or no one, and some one always loses in that scenario. But on the other side, I know that some one has to win, and I'm happy. But, yeah, great chapter.

update!

please~?

Wow. That's all I can say about it. Wow. Absolutely amazing. I love it!

Long live visual kei hot guys who are really girls. I love your Yui and I wanna hear more abou her. This definitely going on my fave stories list; I jut hope that you're going to write more and soon.

Much loveTanika

AGH! I want more!

(Yes, this chapter is definitely worth waiting.)

Livi