Reviews for Come To Me Darling
sunscraped chapter 1 . 3/4/2004
on the last line, I would've added a 'there's' to it. I can send you the mistakes in it, but only if you ask. I like the message it tells and how you wrote it. There's only a few grammatical errors since no one's perfect so very good.
-LXS
onepain chapter 1 . 3/4/2004
pretty pretty
;) I likes...