Reviews for My Beachside Girl
Bleeding Ink chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
This is so sweet, again I like the descriptions. I actually understand this one, unlike the other poem I reviewed. oh yea. "We are beautiful,
a set of matching shakers,
with our cracks and nicks,
But when our hips,
meet and join,
They create something whole."
That's a nice thought. I like this poem, I think I'll show it to my friend, she is bi and would definitely appreciate the passion in this more than I ever could. Lovely job)
bach-player chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
deliciously sensual!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
first off thats an awesome name
Very descriptive and powerful i like it a lot!
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 3/4/2004
Oh! _ I like this one very much, I this is one of your best poems yet. I really liked these lines:
"But when our hips,
meet and join,
They create something whole."
Can I just say.. AW! ::smiles:: and Noemi sounds like a sexy beach goddess, rawr! hehe.
Jenna xx