Reviews for Phantom Limb
vturnip chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
Wow what a great idea. Their gone but still linger, like that phantom itch. Brillant!
mmoonsshiner chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
The poem is beautiful.I love it but even better is that my uncle just had his leg ampt. below the knee. he keeps forgetting its not there _ and starts walking. Kaboom ! muahaha
Nat
floorcollision chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
oh- i like it. :)
experiment with it a bit- just for fun. you might like what you get, and you might not, but it would be a fun poem to toss around.
-fc
ps thx for r/r'ing my work. :) you rock.
katylar chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
I like. Can be interpreted many ways. Another well done piece of poetry.
Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 3/11/2004
very good. Again, you have a great style.
andreadespot chapter 1 . 3/10/2004
this is incredible! i love how you compared these two seemingly different things; very nice!
wisefellow chapter 1 . 3/9/2004
this one is good
bach-player chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
VERY creative! i LOVE the comparison of the pain from a severed love relationship to that of phatom limb pain! wow...so true...you hit it right on the mark!
Juliet Squared chapter 1 . 3/5/2004
Nice...a really good break-up sort of poem. I like it.
Rozovian G chapter 1 . 3/5/2004
Reminds me of a jazz-like song (with the same name) by a christian trashmetal band. To me, it seems like someone died, yet not... Interesting. Strange. Seems contradictory (...absence torments w. your presence...), but it works as a whole. for me, anyway.
Angel Snowson chapter 1 . 3/4/2004
I don't understand this at all. Perhaps because I don't know you. Oh well. Hope to see more works.