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Reviews for
Oh, Lie
Twilit Exaggerance
chapter 1 .
3/5/2004
Well wrote and the rhythm is useful in getting across the last line, which is out of tune, and I remember it most. Good technique. Well done.
Kiss-and-Die
chapter 1 .
3/5/2004
Woah. Amazing , simply amazing.
Dee*