Reviews for Don't Leave Me
goodbye cruel world chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
interesting poem. One section near the end doesn't really fit in well, the "I'm sorry. I'm sorry. How many times must I say it? It hurts. It hurst. Please. Just don't leave me." maybe you could move it to some other place in here or even make it it'w own poem. Keep writing though, this was cool.
f chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
hm... nice topic. Try to keep going, and keep writing. this is good.