omg i loved this story. The ending was effing fantastic. I hate how all love stories end and same mushy way. and fics/fanfics are even worse because the love in those stories usually are so shallow. Typically someone falls in love simply based on looks but on nothing essestinal to a persons being. I liked how rella didn't force herself to choose the outcomes presented to her just cause it was expected of her. She is truely mature in realizing that life isn't a race. One can take times to make their decisions. She shouldn't be forced to accept either captions before she was ready to.I think love is better nutured than rushed. Her leaving didn't mean she was giving any of them up. not really. Tho around the time (as in timeframe) this story was written that would of been a truely brave thing for rella to do, especially as a women. So all i can say is that this story could not of ended any better.

:( :( :( :( :( I loved it! but the ending... :( I see why you did it but now I'm all sad... and happy. grr I don't know what to think. You're a really good writer. Keep writing, and hurry up with a sequel. *adds to favorite author list*

Wow, you know I was trying to come up with what I thought would happen in the story all day today. I thought that she would meet Aldric and he would fall in love with her...I still seriously can't believe I was right. The ending was surprising but not horrible, I liked it...is there a sequal? If there isn't, you should seriously write one. Like, on her adventures after she leaves, not right after but, like, two years or something after? I think it would be pretty cool. I loved this a lot. :3

Your story had a great plot, but the mechanics were not so good. Some quotation marks were off, and periods were commas should be and vice versa. In my opinion your story would be 10 times better if you had edited the story. Now don't get me wrong I totally loved every second of it, it was just the grammar that through me. Also another idea is to make your chapters long by adding more detail.

Great story and can't wait for the

ACK! You...sniff you totally ruined it! lol I wanted Damon and Rella to get together ... man! this sux now ima have to imagine it ... *thinks about it for a while* okay all better lol well u did a gr8 job with the story!

Why does she don't accept offer to Damon propose to her last night? I thought she loved him and wants to be with him. I wonder how will Damon feel about it. Will he be wait for her to return? So he gave her a freedom? Interesting thought of Rella. Why? she should accept it, oh well. It's your decision to write it. Hurry update soon.

oh, so good! Sry i haven't been reveiwing at all, but i like to reveiw at the end of the story. OMG i love ur story! It was wonderful! I can't wait for the sequel! God luck and great job!
~cpe

good story. i'll have to apologize in advance, i don't do long reviews. there quick and to the point. (i really like the story so far.)

very very very very good ending! now you have to make a sequel yay i think she should marry aldric hes... uh cooler! haha well done
caks

Great ending! I've been reading this story for a while, and I've really enjoyed the Rella's character development. For a story under romance, I like how you've taken the story to another, deeper level. And in case it's not clear, I personally agree with Rella's decision. Thanks for the great read!

im sad. there was so much buildup for a damon/rella romance, and im quite disapointed in the way the story went. yet, i look forward to the seuquel, to know how the whole story eventually ends. boo to aldric. there was such a lack of chemistry between aldric and rella, and i dont see how rella loves him, and couldnt make a choice of damon over aldric! anyways...

No! I don't want Rella to married to Aldric. I hoped she won't accepted it. What about Damon? How will he feel about this if he discovered it? Why does Aldric wants to marry her? He only just met her, that's all. Hurry update soon.

i like your new chapter and i can't wait to read more.

keep going
i LOVE it
WFTNC
TTFN
Luv Yas
Lils

Phew.. I just read all that. It's a good storyline, and the characters are alright. You mentioned somewhere that you don't want to be cliche, but not too different either... I would say start swinging for the differences, because that makes good writing better. I think somebody already pointed out the van gogh issue near the beginning of your story, and there are some typo problems you need to keep a better eye out for... It also seems like you try to get kinda philosophical(sp)or meaningful, and it just doesn't work well. I'd like to see how the end result turns out, once you go back and make all the changes you keep promising. (btw... they always says it's much easier to take out the excess than have to go back and add more.)