Reviews for Thankyou Fear
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
interesting take on this thats for sure. nice!
lisaslife chapter 1 . 3/11/2004
Very Beatiful, I love the form.
EchoesOfReason chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
This is good, very good actually, and very true! Great job, keep it up! The only advice I give is, pick one of the two, either make it rhyme or don't because at some parts the flow of it just kind of disappears. Now an easier way to remedy this would be instead of rhyming and flowing, or not rhyming at all, you could also just write it in an essay form. That way you can also go in depth on what you mean with your words and so on and so forth. YOu know what I mean? Well you know I think this is great so don't stop writing...EVER! Take care, great job, and good luck with the story!
Love always,