Reviews for Alone |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is so good Kourtney! So sad and touching! I loved it! You have a knack (hehe funny word) for poetry and I seem to love every poem you write! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you've got a type-o for starters: "And the screaming together as the car begin to be crushed-should be began to be crushed. This is overall a good read, except, in my opinion, the ending. Possibly, "Why didn't you take me too?" Instead you leave me here, to face this cold world... alone. And that's just a possiblity, more or less, a suggestion. That last question just doesn't fit with the rest I don't think. Good job anyway. J-fReAK P.S. Check out My Autobiography of Them |