|Reviews for She's The One|
| nine iron chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
This is a poem that invites interpretation. I see from it a love enforced only by physical desires and one that emmits false feelings to give the impression of love. Yet underneath it is not love, a fasard cloaking the life and sould of the couple. Well how I see it any way, hope you dont mind me doing that. This is more of a poem that should be 600 words or many more so expansion couldnt hurt. Still its got its charms as it isnt allmost a poem in some peoples view. I guess it is but discussions for another time and/or place. It is good to be controversial is the main point. Keep it up and good luck.