|Reviews for Don't Die Before You live|
| Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
I'm doing drama GCSE. for the poem part, and you've probably already done your assesment, get rid of apostrophies and pronounce whole words or separate words, don't merge them.
| Areida Hollyoak chapter 1 . 3/10/2004
whee so nice.
err i'm a drama girl too... so if you wanna hand... no prob. ut your older than me and it might be weird taking advice from a just-turned-13-yr-old...
err. when you read the first bit, say it sort of wonderingly and pause longer after "eaten souls".
ok i better not say anymore. if you wrote this yourself congrats, man, its really good. if not, congrat to whoever did. . hugs A/H
| hiphopopotomus chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
hey, how crazy, at the bottom you said your name is Siobhan.. so is mine! *ahem*
I was in drama last semester, and I was listening to it in my head as I read it (yeah, i know, that doesn't make much sense) but, anyways, I think for the poem part, each line should have a bit of a space while you say it, and just say the whole thing with a lot of emotion, it should be really effective then. Good job.