Reviews for Don't Die Before You live
Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
I'm doing drama GCSE. for the poem part, and you've probably already done your assesment, get rid of apostrophies and pronounce whole words or separate words, don't merge them.
Areida Hollyoak chapter 1 . 3/10/2004
whee so nice.
err i'm a drama girl too... so if you wanna hand... no prob. ut your older than me and it might be weird taking advice from a just-turned-13-yr-old...
err. when you read the first bit, say it sort of wonderingly and pause longer after "eaten souls".
ok i better not say anymore. if you wrote this yourself congrats, man, its really good. if not, congrat to whoever did. . hugs A/H
hiphopopotomus chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
hey, how crazy, at the bottom you said your name is Siobhan.. so is mine! *ahem*
I was in drama last semester, and I was listening to it in my head as I read it (yeah, i know, that doesn't make much sense) but, anyways, I think for the poem part, each line should have a bit of a space while you say it, and just say the whole thing with a lot of emotion, it should be really effective then. Good job.