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Okay, stupid question. Anyways, I was buzzing around Fiction Press and figured I'd see if you had anything new.
E! I like it. Nah, no joke. It's a song, right? (Sorry, feeling sort of dense at the moment) It flows nicely. I'm sure you could get someone to put it to music if you really wanted to.
I personaly have a major flow problem. That's why I only write free verse poems.