And that was good... MORE MORE More. AND NOW!

kris... (Isn't my name ORIGINAL?)

Hey, I didn't know about this story! Why didn't you tell me..:( Anyway, this is beginning to become interestinger. Write more please?
TK
Oh Yeah..YAY BEER

this is interesting! nice concept! keep up the good work!
Kristina Toffland aka Total VAughn Lover

This sounds very interesting and original. I'd like to see how it turns out! And I also have a weird obsession with dreams...they fascinate me. Keep writing!

Whoa. I actually understand. And I was right. The dude and the girl met in the same place. Well, duh. n.n;; But this is really good. Make them longer, and a tad more thought-provoking. You know how I like that stuff. n.n;;
Blinding Love
Carry On.

Of course I want more. And now that I spent the time to reread it, I actually get it. I wonder who that silhouette is. (probably misspelled) Is it the guy in the next chapter? -ponders to self as walks away-
Blinding Love
Carry On.

Wow! That was a great chapter! I want to know what's going on though. Please hurry and update. Keep up the good work!
jbluver

HEY! This is good! I'm still not sure where it's going, but it's going somewhere good! n.n;; I hope that you continue writing as well as you did before. Probably even better, knowing you. n.n;; TTYL.
Love in Christ,
Blinding Love

Great story although it was a bit weird. I would really like to see where you are going with this so please, please, please, please, please, update soon. Thanks!
jbluver

I ish wanting more! n.n;; I'm not sure if I understand all of it, it seems to jump around a bit, doesn't it? But that's okay, since you said to bear with you. Well, I hope you write more. I didn't get to read it earlier because it wouldn't find your name on 'Search.' Then I thought, I'd check my reviews, and I clicked on your name. I'm an idiot. But this is good so far, even if you did say you weren't too good at writing originals.
Love in Christ,