Reviews for Trapped
NJ Is My Home chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
i like this one..the rhyming was really good..i like the longing for childhood..nice
Dahlia Wolffe chapter 2 . 4/4/2005
For the record- the meter doesn't matter- it still ryhmes, it's still good. *thumbs up*-Yin
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 2 . 5/5/2004
hard to decide... i like both...
imxnotxyourxstar chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
Nice poem, I liked the whole concept behind this one. Keep up the good work! btw thanks for the review :)
SamaraTheBloodDraindRose chapter 2 . 4/13/2004
not much diff, but the second one is best in my opinion. Once again, SP rocks, but yeah, keep up the awesome work, our on my faves list now! _
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 3/9/2004
Aww this is so sweet... "stare at children having fun, wishing you can someday again be one." Really good line, fits in perfectly, pretty much makes the poem. The rhyming's awesome.
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
An interesting way to rhym. Creative. I like it.
Your Doom, your Master, your Orc King
Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
To me, this poem means growing up and never being the carefree child that I once was. You might have meant something else.
But anyway, it's a really good poem. Deep, and it kinda gives me a sense of...regret. Great work.