Reviews for Torn
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
omg omg omg! wow... i can so relate. bout hating and wanting to hurt sm1 but yet wanting to be close to them and all... omg, its drives me f*ing mad! mad i say! omg, this was like perfect! perfect, unlike my spelling, LOL.
Jennacharm chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
You spelled 'not' wrong in your summary.
The 'screw you' in this poem lowers the quality.
I like your word choice for torn.
The ending... 'No more feelings ever' just seems really awkward. But then again I don't think you want to end on screw you and revenge.
AmethystTrish chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
i like this a lot. it reminds me of my situation with my ex. its a very nice piece- well written.
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
Nicely written. It conveys your feelings well. The end is rather sad. I mean, thinking the way I do, I agree with it. But, there's something that is still sad about it. No one should have no feelings. Makes me think.
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Your Doom, Your Master, Your Orc King
Forever Foreign chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
wow i really like it...great concept..i think your right about the end...but its really not that bad...its just that the rest of your poem is so awesome..i think thats why it seems almost dull..great job!