Reviews for A Mortal's Fate
veralidaine sarrasri chapter 1 . 3/9/2004
that was great! can't wait till next chapter
AngelOfMusic387 chapter 1 . 3/9/2004
Poor Damien. Why does he have to be sacrificed? Is it because he is "evil"? Update quickly, because I want to know more! As always, I'll be happy to beta this story if you want me to. :)
Peg Pannery chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
I think your giving too much away, leaving little left to develop. Also, try not to make your boys sound like girls!